Story thing Two

This is the second story Carly has started and I will continue:

She ran.  The leaves of a flax bush stroked her legs.  She stumbled over a root but threw her hand out and managed to find a tree trunk under her questing fingers.  She pushed against it and found herself balanced again on two feet.  Behind her the voices rose and fell excitedly.  She was fast and she knew it but would she be fast enough today…  

She has to be! She will be locked in the prion in the castle for years if she does not do so. She tried to run faster holding onto a long stick for support. She knew what she had done was bad, but she had still gone and done it. She had been starving, like she was now, her tummy moaning for something to feast on. Why? why had she been so stupid, if she had not she would not of been in this case.

"Oh well," She thought, "Just keep running."

A little story thingy...

For our task this week we have to continue a part of a story that Carly has already written the first bit of it. Right now I will do the first one(The bit in italics is Carlys bit):

He stared at the monitor; his face was lit up by the light from the screen.    The room was dark, the hum of the machine the most dominant noise in the room. He twisted in his seat trying to find a comfortable position.  The wires prevented him from every finding a comfy spot but still he tried. No luck.  A small beep from the computer focused his attention, it was beginning… 

"YES!" he screamed jumping out of his uncomfortable chair and kicking it, "Finally, I will now be the king of tHE WORLD!!!..." He stumbled over a wire causing it to fall out of its plug in the wall. "WHAT!!!!!!!" The man boomed, "YOU STUPID WIRE! NOOOOO!"

He lunged for the wire and plugged it back in but it was too late, the screen had already gone blank.

The man tried to fix it, he needed this, his life depended on it, but It never worked again. He slowly sat back down in the uncomfortable chair and then he realized what he must do, What was more important then becoming king of the world, he must destroy this chair.

Argument

I have also started my argument now and the topic is high schools should have play grounds 'cause here in Wellington we don't have play grounds in our high schools!!!  LAME.
So I am writing about why they should have them and all that and after I have finished it I may send copy to Wellington high school 9the high school I am going to next year). I really hope it turns out good!!!!!

Explanation writing

Yo!

So I have written on this in a while but thats because I doidnt know what to write about! But now I do YAAAAY! So through out this year we need to do a narrative a explanation and a argument. I had nearly finished the narrative then my teach Richard came up to us and was like remember you have to do all three so I quickly started my explanation!!!!!

Its about how to use a mechanical pencil (I know weird) and it has got everything you need to know if you want to use one! Its pretty weird..... K bye!

DIVERGENT! (A book)

So we got told to write about our favorite book on here. At the moment mine is a book called divergent, its really good because its a mixture of action drama romance etc. The writer is also really good at writing and I wish I could be like her. She has all these parts that just drags you into the story and it kind of gave me insparation for when I was doing  my writing sample. I also really like the idea of how there are difrent say groups in divergent and the main character, Beatrice, Is in the one that frowns upon selfishness and they are all the same and everyone comes before them etc. So yeah. Bye.

Writing Stuff

So I was looking in my writing books and I found this story that I started sometime last year and its about a boy named Johnathan who is really different and he and his family and friend Daughtry move to Hawaii. It is a really weird story and its 24 pages long. It starts off with him and his friend Maddison at a volcano and this gang (including daughtry) dangles them over it and then they all dies except for daughtry maddison. So yeah.

Writing week over!!!!

So the writing week is over and I'm so HAPPY!  Its like I'm walking on sunshine..... and it feels good!
All right now... I don't think my writing sample is my best work but I don't really care I mean its just a sample.... that you get tested on..... :\ OH WELL! I never have liked writing sample and Im not going to start now. Anyways, I have NO MORE WRITING SAMPLES FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOO.......... Except for at high school.... but they will probably be a bit different.... probably a bit harder too..... Someone save me.