Writing sample= Progress!

I have finally got a page of writing for my writing sample. It is about a girl named Odette who hates where she lives because she gets bullied and she has the worst teacher etc. Then she moves countries to New Zealand (The best country ever if you didnt already know that BTW) and her lifes because way better. So far I am up to when she has just gotten to her house in NZ but I am thinking of re writing the story again because its not that good. I like my beging, its 'I sat at my dull desk, drumming my fingers, waiting....' Then it goes into a new paragraph and into the proper story. When I have writter it better and all that I will post another blog thingy of some of it, but for now, BUH BYE!